Peer Review

PLT 1 Review

Comments that I made:

Maybe add your thoughts not only what they believe.

Like the questions that are being asked but maybe then answer how you feel about the question.

Your side on how you feel was never really said. Tie that into your quotes and explain yourself.

Where are your views? You have good points to your essay and the quotes make sense. I think the teacher would like to see your view on this endless conversation.

The overall impression of this paper is a good overall start. I think it would be helpful to add more of your views then he said this and that.

 

PLT 2 (Kristen and Alex)

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